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Hence Forth Refered To As The Company
Every new technology is bound to have a few kinks, but the Genson High Technology Agency has covered it’s assets pretty well with a 17 page legal disclaimer and third party oversight every step of ‘The Process’. And when Carl Barnes wins a life-changing lottery he finds more in store for him than just fame and fortune, he finds himself, and in such a way as he never would have thought possible. (Image used without permission, but it inspired this story)
edit: edited a little bit, no major changes, but I did update the picture to make sure the artist got full credit
edit: edited a little bit, no major changes, but I did update the picture to make sure the artist got full credit
Category Story / Transformation
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 95 x 120px
File Size 290.5 kB
Listed in Folders
Just finished reading this. Wow. Great stuff. It's especially interesting to see the different sides of Carl. It's like night and day, or snow and sun. Your characters are also very well-designed, and solid through the entire story. Have you considered submitting this to the TSA?
TSA = Transformation Story Archive, or http://lists.integral.org/listinfo/tsa-talk
Um, yeah... that's my fault I'm still kinda writing it, but the truth be told that I haven't written anything NEW in it for about a year. so I thought I'd post it and get feedback, and hope that would inspire some creative juices... but then again, if you read the HOT TUB scene then you know SOME juices are already flowing
I loved it. :) Good characterization and detail. And she settings for the love scenes were excellent. It definitely felt natural throughout. There's a lot of anticipating building up up to the transformation, which is both a kind of tease yet fulfilling at the same time.
Though, some of the downsides is the testing procedures which could have been glossed over. Oh, and the whole benching 400 lbs. Just a nitpick, but I find the furry=super mindset silly. That scene set off my "fantasy fulfillment" detector.
Though, some of the downsides is the testing procedures which could have been glossed over. Oh, and the whole benching 400 lbs. Just a nitpick, but I find the furry=super mindset silly. That scene set off my "fantasy fulfillment" detector.
well, um... when I was in high school I was bench pressing 500lbs and leg pressing over 1000lbs.
and I'm not really all that strong... ok, not any more I'm not. too much chair patrol
"super Furry" wasn't quite what I had in mind, just "way better than average" augmented by nano-technology
and I'm not really all that strong... ok, not any more I'm not. too much chair patrol
"super Furry" wasn't quite what I had in mind, just "way better than average" augmented by nano-technology
It was the way in which it was portrayed. Like it was an effortless benefit and was otherwise not relevant to the story.
However, I do have a certain bias whenever numbers show up in RP/fiction, is that in trying to quantify often the author tries too hard to do something that isn't totally important.
However, I do have a certain bias whenever numbers show up in RP/fiction, is that in trying to quantify often the author tries too hard to do something that isn't totally important.
the only pic is the header pic (which inspired the story). I am not an artist, nor did I make the original picture.
HTML I can do, matter of fact I cheated and will give you the link to another site I have this story posted
http://stardustr.us/hence_forth_ref.....as_the_company
picture was done by
XianJaguar xianjaguar http://www.furaffinity.net/user/xianjaguar/
HTML I can do, matter of fact I cheated and will give you the link to another site I have this story posted
http://stardustr.us/hence_forth_ref.....as_the_company
picture was done by
XianJaguar xianjaguar http://www.furaffinity.net/user/xianjaguar/
Yeah, I know how that is. Used to love writing Tails fanfics but dropped off in the middle of a trilogy (called "The Chosen One Trilogy" about Tails being turned into a cyborg by Robotnik, killing Bunnie and exiled from Knothole for 10 years. Kinda dropped off at that point of the story, though I do have other Tails stories also unfinished)
make you a deal, if you can find my muse and bring her back to me, I'll chain her down and make her write some more...
this has been sitting around for almost 5 years since I was able to get my muse BACK long enough to write ANYTHING >.<
Oh, and I am glad you enjoyed reading it =^.^=
this has been sitting around for almost 5 years since I was able to get my muse BACK long enough to write ANYTHING >.<
Oh, and I am glad you enjoyed reading it =^.^=
I have others, just not posted here because they are not furry
lemme getchu a linkery
http://stardustr.us/taxonomy/term/330
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