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Don't look directly at the bugs! Sorry this took me so long, guys. I'll try and get a second part up today, let's hope I can manage. I know that there's problems with the prose on this one, I'll fix and update it later. At any rate, here it is! Part two of a story I never intended to split in half. This continues right after where http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11001086/ left off. If you have not read that yet, read it!
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I'm writing this on my forth day without a wink of sleep, I'll fix everything later XD.
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I'm writing this on my forth day without a wink of sleep, I'll fix everything later XD.
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Category Story / Baby fur
Species Lion
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 52.1 kB
Heh, was there something extra in that food/milk he drank other than the sleeping and muscle relaxant, or did he really only last a few minutes after waking up before involuntarily using his diaper? XD
Real talk though; won't anyone recognize that he's missing, or was this plan actually from his family?
Why else would he be targeted?
Do his captors, if not hired by someone who knows him, only target specific people based on certain physical/mental criteria?
Will any of this be answered in the next installments? x3
Real talk though; won't anyone recognize that he's missing, or was this plan actually from his family?
Why else would he be targeted?
Do his captors, if not hired by someone who knows him, only target specific people based on certain physical/mental criteria?
Will any of this be answered in the next installments? x3
Yes, there was something else in the food and milk =P
I established the character so that nobody would notice him missing:
A) He's on summer vacation
B) He works for cash
C) He dosn't live with his parents
D) His rent is taken directly from his bank account
E) He's not a close relationship person.
Everything you just asked will be answered in the future installments, particularly in days 4, 5, and 6, the chapters who's titles I've deliberately ommitted from the journal XD. Those will be the infodump chapters.
I established the character so that nobody would notice him missing:
A) He's on summer vacation
B) He works for cash
C) He dosn't live with his parents
D) His rent is taken directly from his bank account
E) He's not a close relationship person.
Everything you just asked will be answered in the future installments, particularly in days 4, 5, and 6, the chapters who's titles I've deliberately ommitted from the journal XD. Those will be the infodump chapters.
It's going to start with him accepting the treatment, by around the end of the first week, then continue on to him fully regressing into the mindset of a young toddler by the end of the second week. It's going slow, I know, and this is going to be the size of a small novel by the time it's done. Rest assured in knowing that at the climax of every day he will regress, then come out of it. It will get deeper and deeper every part until it has become so much a part of him that he realizes he's better off, and stays that way blissful ever after. The point of the story is the mental regression, and, if I gave it all quickly, I wouldn't have enough content to fill all forteen parts XD. Sorry if I'm going too slow.
To be honest I rather like the pacing. I tend prefer longer and more detailed stories, a bit like Onecho’s Blue Glow. I also like the fact you are posting it in sections, with Blue Glow I made the mistake of reading it all one night and the next thing I knew it was 4AM. Anyway this is very nice so far and I look forward to reading day two.
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