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Tar finally shaded and in all his detailed glory. ah yes... I love this character and I really like the armor design. *me proud* :3
I am seldomly proud and ... I normally can't stand a picture I draw for more than a month or so... let's hope alltogether that it's differen with this one!
anyway! I added the detailed shading and erased all the disturbing lines of the model. I decided about final details in the picture like his hair and the armor gloves and finally drew thicker lines around the whole figure and around the things that are in the foreground of the picture like the sword.
I hope you enjoyed this a bit.
It's a design for the most heavy armored class in the rpg me and my boy
tybalt_the_friesian are developing. There are also anthro-beings and other strange folks that inhabi the world of Edeja ^_^
If there are any questions, just ask!
(be it about my drawing style and so on or about the rpg)
*rubs hips on Tar*
Enjoy!
HB Pencil
total 8 hours
https://www.metaplot03.com
step II : http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1103596/
step I : http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1102158/
I am seldomly proud and ... I normally can't stand a picture I draw for more than a month or so... let's hope alltogether that it's differen with this one!
anyway! I added the detailed shading and erased all the disturbing lines of the model. I decided about final details in the picture like his hair and the armor gloves and finally drew thicker lines around the whole figure and around the things that are in the foreground of the picture like the sword.
I hope you enjoyed this a bit.
It's a design for the most heavy armored class in the rpg me and my boy
tybalt_the_friesian are developing. There are also anthro-beings and other strange folks that inhabi the world of Edeja ^_^ If there are any questions, just ask!
(be it about my drawing style and so on or about the rpg)
*rubs hips on Tar*
Enjoy!
HB Pencil
total 8 hours
https://www.metaplot03.com
step II : http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1103596/
step I : http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1102158/
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 720 x 1106px
File Size 412.6 kB
I love as was the line of pencil. And the design of the armor is great, I love it. It is a very good drawing.
Criticizing as a "son of a bitch" (make it clear that I love drawing and I criticize from friendship):
I do not like how was the face or hair.
I do not like how was the arm that holds the sword. The arm was better in the first drawing, before it had perspective. Check that the forearm was ahead of the bisep, that was lost when you put your armor to him.
I do not like your lines what he has done in the "skirt", do not have good pulse. You should practise, it is very difficult to draw similar (see the art of Mark Silvestri or Paolo Eleuteri Serpieri in Google).
And finally, the work of the armor will be missing shadow, as the armor has worked and is very much relief, and part of the armature above elsewhere. Putting shadow would give much more strength to this picture and would be even more excellent.
Me encanta como quedó la linea del lapiz. Y el diseño de la armadura está genial, me encanta. Es un dibujo muy bueno.
Criticando como un "hijo de puta" (que quede claro que me encanta el dibujo y que yo critico desde la amistad):
No me gusta cómo quedó la cara, ni el pelo.
No me gusta cómo quedó el brazo que sostiene la espada. Estaba mejor en el primer dibujo, antes tenia perspectiva. Fijate que el antebrazo estaba adelante de el bisep, eso se perdió cuando le pones la armadura.
No me gustan las lineas qué le has hecho en la "falda", no tienen buen pulso. Deberias practicarlas, es muy dificil dibujarlas parecidas (mirá el arte de Mark Silvestri o Paolo Eleuteri Serpieri en el Google).
Y por último, al trabajo de la armadura le faltaría sombra, ya que es muy trabajada y tiene mucho relieve, y una parte de la armadura encima a otra parte. Ponerle sombra le daría mucha mas fuerza a este dibujo y sería aún más que excelente.
Criticizing as a "son of a bitch" (make it clear that I love drawing and I criticize from friendship):
I do not like how was the face or hair.
I do not like how was the arm that holds the sword. The arm was better in the first drawing, before it had perspective. Check that the forearm was ahead of the bisep, that was lost when you put your armor to him.
I do not like your lines what he has done in the "skirt", do not have good pulse. You should practise, it is very difficult to draw similar (see the art of Mark Silvestri or Paolo Eleuteri Serpieri in Google).
And finally, the work of the armor will be missing shadow, as the armor has worked and is very much relief, and part of the armature above elsewhere. Putting shadow would give much more strength to this picture and would be even more excellent.
Me encanta como quedó la linea del lapiz. Y el diseño de la armadura está genial, me encanta. Es un dibujo muy bueno.
Criticando como un "hijo de puta" (que quede claro que me encanta el dibujo y que yo critico desde la amistad):
No me gusta cómo quedó la cara, ni el pelo.
No me gusta cómo quedó el brazo que sostiene la espada. Estaba mejor en el primer dibujo, antes tenia perspectiva. Fijate que el antebrazo estaba adelante de el bisep, eso se perdió cuando le pones la armadura.
No me gustan las lineas qué le has hecho en la "falda", no tienen buen pulso. Deberias practicarlas, es muy dificil dibujarlas parecidas (mirá el arte de Mark Silvestri o Paolo Eleuteri Serpieri en el Google).
Y por último, al trabajo de la armadura le faltaría sombra, ya que es muy trabajada y tiene mucho relieve, y una parte de la armadura encima a otra parte. Ponerle sombra le daría mucha mas fuerza a este dibujo y sería aún más que excelente.
thanks. XD Well I did not want to place detailed metal-shading all over the armor and the left hand was the best that I could do. I am cionfident with it in this state - it's finished. I still have much to learn but in a whole the picture looks fine and it accomplishes me. I could work out the armor as I wanted it to look and that was the most important for me.
But the armor plate of the gloves were too difficult for me, I could not figure out how to place them on the left hand. Next time it will be better but I also like it this time. It's a useful picture to show the poeple our world and the designs involved.
And for the hair... antoher thing I could not do right. But curly hair creeps me out when I need to draw it and yet I could not give up and give him straigt hait instead, could I? No one would have noticed that something is wrong, but the character has curly hair and so I went with it till the end. With practice it'll be better.
But the armor plate of the gloves were too difficult for me, I could not figure out how to place them on the left hand. Next time it will be better but I also like it this time. It's a useful picture to show the poeple our world and the designs involved.
And for the hair... antoher thing I could not do right. But curly hair creeps me out when I need to draw it and yet I could not give up and give him straigt hait instead, could I? No one would have noticed that something is wrong, but the character has curly hair and so I went with it till the end. With practice it'll be better.
Anyway, this is an excellent drawing, and I like a lot. The criticism that I give you have done, is irrelevant. I was bothered having commented.
De todas maneras, este es un dibujo excelente, y me gusta mucho. La crítica que te he hecho, no tiene importancia. Me ha molestado haberlas comentado.
De todas maneras, este es un dibujo excelente, y me gusta mucho. La crítica que te he hecho, no tiene importancia. Me ha molestado haberlas comentado.
It's just... I don't know if it is about the translating web.site... but you started every sentence in the critic part with: I do not like... that is in fact a strong expression. =/ I really... felt a bit bad after your critique but I treid not to show it. I know you don't mean me any harm. But I don't feel so good at this time as you can read in my journal... so those strong words made me a bit sad. In fact you told me about the weaknesses I already knew. *sighs* I pointed them out in the sketch and treid to refine them as good as I could. I simply could not do any better, but I know the flaws are still obvious. It's nice that you care about my drawings, though.
It's better than people stopping by and don't saying anything or without paying attention. There will be better times for me.
It's better than people stopping by and don't saying anything or without paying attention. There will be better times for me.
I think there has been a misunderstanding. With all this translate, it is badly interpreted texts. Even I wanted to be funny to do it (now I bite my tongue, for the anger I have).
Since I have not wanted to be tough and I had not criticized understand very well your response to my critics.
Of course, the picture is extraordinary.
You do not have to feel bad. Now I feel very bad for having made you feel bad.
-- Crying --
Please be my friend again. Sorry.
Since I have not wanted to be tough and I had not criticized understand very well your response to my critics.
Of course, the picture is extraordinary.
You do not have to feel bad. Now I feel very bad for having made you feel bad.
-- Crying --
Please be my friend again. Sorry.
I don't stop being your friend just because you gave critique to one of my pictures. I already said that I apprecieate the fact that you look a my drawings in detail and alos I like encouraging critique every now and then. I just am not feeling so good for general reasons. I have a lot of stress lately and so on.
I said too that it is very difficult to talk on the internet with such a language barrier. I never thought you meant to offend me, my freind. But words can hurt, you know? Even if they aren't meant to hurt. But I do not loathe you because of that! Just don't be sad anymore, okay? Thanks for sharing the picture. IT's really a strong expression in the dog's face. I like that.
I said too that it is very difficult to talk on the internet with such a language barrier. I never thought you meant to offend me, my freind. But words can hurt, you know? Even if they aren't meant to hurt. But I do not loathe you because of that! Just don't be sad anymore, okay? Thanks for sharing the picture. IT's really a strong expression in the dog's face. I like that.
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