Rise - part I (odt)
Noticed the text lost some features when put into comments and is "less readable", so I'm posting the original .odt file here.
This is the beginning of a short story that should (hopefully) shed some light on what's life in Kagenuma about and how much "fun" are it's inhabitants having.
Some of the characters already appear in my gallery, so you should have a rough idea of their appearance.
Any critique and grammar nazism is welcome.
Rating is set to general at the moment, if you feel it is not appropriate just note me.
This is the beginning of a short story that should (hopefully) shed some light on what's life in Kagenuma about and how much "fun" are it's inhabitants having.
Some of the characters already appear in my gallery, so you should have a rough idea of their appearance.
Any critique and grammar nazism is welcome.
Rating is set to general at the moment, if you feel it is not appropriate just note me.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Rodent (Other)
Size 92 x 120px
File Size 28.5 kB
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