"In the Year 2309, one cat has the funk..." Autobiographical account of the life and times of Zerox DeLorean Rezonium, The Cyborg from the future, the man with the plan. The prologue tells about Zerox's origins, his past from the future, and how he got here.
Note: This story assumes the reader know the universe is anthropomorphic, so i won't spend a lot of time Describing why people are furries or whatever. keep it in mind, as I am a sci-fi writer who happens to be a furry, not the other way around. criticism expected and encouraged, just don't be a dick bag. Enjoy the story.
Note: This story assumes the reader know the universe is anthropomorphic, so i won't spend a lot of time Describing why people are furries or whatever. keep it in mind, as I am a sci-fi writer who happens to be a furry, not the other way around. criticism expected and encouraged, just don't be a dick bag. Enjoy the story.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 2.7 kB
Hey, this is Blazed from IRC. I think this is a cute and fun little piece, you have a nice witty voice going on here. It is pretty colloquial, which I think suits the piece rather well, however, I wanna read more, you know? I feel like it was just starting to gather steam,and oyu have a sense of something impending by mentioning time limits, but then it ends suddenly. MOAR!
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