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The heat continues on, as Jade is whining and complaining of this uncontrollable weather.. how long will she last? ... on the other hand Maggie doesn't seem to be affected at all.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Pokemon
Species Pokemon
Size 1036 x 746px
File Size 183 kB
Ok, if you're asking for my critique--
Compared to how you draw your characters usually, I'd have to say Maggie is prolly better than you've drawn her before, which shows progress..which is good!
But that doesn't mean there isn't things to improve on.
Upper-body
I never--NEVER EVER wanted to say this, but you really, REALLY ought to work out how the torso works.
If you have an initial shape in mind, just keep that in line--There's a collarbone, a rib cage and whatever jazz that is.
Keep these deals in mind and you can't really go wrong..with that structure at least..Which brings up another deal!
Boobage
Ok--i'm gonna be HYPER-FRANK from accounting because this happens ALL THE TIME.
The boobs--get this, because it's gonna be on the test in the future?
Boobs don't start..AT THE COLLAR. I'd show you an actual reference, but who wants to look in a science book for this shet? I'll tell you who, horny school children lacking actual pr0n.
Too low? Think lower. Sitting on the knees? Think lowerokdon't think lower. Basically? Lower your tits. Keep it on the chest.
Another thing! ARM LENGTH! This is a big deal because no one likes a deal where the arms are awkwardly short of too long..But in this case, they are..too short.
Normally, the elbows would end right at the waist before going going further down..for the hands.
The hands stop right at the thigh and..there you go. Properly lengthened arms.
Really that's about it..Also, keep in mind that when 3/4th view comes into play, symmetries does not work..
Just sayin'.
Compared to how you draw your characters usually, I'd have to say Maggie is prolly better than you've drawn her before, which shows progress..which is good!
But that doesn't mean there isn't things to improve on.
Upper-body
I never--NEVER EVER wanted to say this, but you really, REALLY ought to work out how the torso works.
If you have an initial shape in mind, just keep that in line--There's a collarbone, a rib cage and whatever jazz that is.
Keep these deals in mind and you can't really go wrong..with that structure at least..Which brings up another deal!
Boobage
Ok--i'm gonna be HYPER-FRANK from accounting because this happens ALL THE TIME.
The boobs--get this, because it's gonna be on the test in the future?
Boobs don't start..AT THE COLLAR. I'd show you an actual reference, but who wants to look in a science book for this shet? I'll tell you who, horny school children lacking actual pr0n.
Too low? Think lower. Sitting on the knees? Think lowerokdon't think lower. Basically? Lower your tits. Keep it on the chest.
Another thing! ARM LENGTH! This is a big deal because no one likes a deal where the arms are awkwardly short of too long..But in this case, they are..too short.
Normally, the elbows would end right at the waist before going going further down..for the hands.
The hands stop right at the thigh and..there you go. Properly lengthened arms.
Really that's about it..Also, keep in mind that when 3/4th view comes into play, symmetries does not work..
Just sayin'.
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