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This is an update on the track here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10779568/
Took some advice from a few friends and changed a few things, reworked my EQ some and added a few things. I dunno what is missing or needs to be taken away, I do not want to add much more cuz I feel the track is already being crowded, I may just need to work on variation throughout the track.
I like the glitch feel through it but I think I may be overdoing it, I don't know if there is enough of a melody in the track, I also feel my bass line may be a bit lacking. I know I did okay with my percussion but again I feel that there could be more variation. I hope the integrity of the track I remixed is still felt and that I did not go to overboard making it my own.
Took some advice from a few friends and changed a few things, reworked my EQ some and added a few things. I dunno what is missing or needs to be taken away, I do not want to add much more cuz I feel the track is already being crowded, I may just need to work on variation throughout the track.
I like the glitch feel through it but I think I may be overdoing it, I don't know if there is enough of a melody in the track, I also feel my bass line may be a bit lacking. I know I did okay with my percussion but again I feel that there could be more variation. I hope the integrity of the track I remixed is still felt and that I did not go to overboard making it my own.
Category Music / Industrial
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 102 x 120px
File Size 4.35 MB
The intro kinda stumped me and then I heard the melody kick in. It's great, and you're right about the glitchy feel. It suits the arrangement. Have you considered adding in some smoother synths, though, in the backdrop just to give it a little more texture. It might help to pick up some of the harmony as well. As for the percussion, maybe tinker with the panning and the dynamics a little.
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