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Murina returns to the Alley to continue getting to know the Norwich family. With Alfie not home, she finally has a chance to talk with several of his siblings, but that doesn't make the conversations any less tense.
alfie -> Shane_Rufus
murina -> pac
FBA -> BuckHopper
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From the Alley to the Big City is a creative collaboration between Shane_Rufus and pac.
for a complete list of art, stories, audio and more, please view the project index! or visit the official FAtBC website!
Murina returns to the Alley to continue getting to know the Norwich family. With Alfie not home, she finally has a chance to talk with several of his siblings, but that doesn't make the conversations any less tense.
alfie -> Shane_Rufus
murina -> pac
FBA -> BuckHopper
***
From the Alley to the Big City is a creative collaboration between Shane_Rufus and pac.
for a complete list of art, stories, audio and more, please view the project index! or visit the official FAtBC website!
Category Story / All
Species Rat
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 32.6 kB
Wow, things are getting wilder with each passing chapter!! I love how you depicted the members of the Norwich family and how everyone has such a peculiar nature and is astoundingly different and unique and SO REAL. I know, I say it every single time, but it's just how good this is getting.
Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the WONDERFUL work!
Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the WONDERFUL work!
Thank you so much! I'm always struggling to make sure the characters have their own voices and personalities, but dang it's tough in text especially when I'm also trying to get across that they're kinda all hard to understand.
I think once we get this whole hunk out I'd love to do it all on audio.
I think once we get this whole hunk out I'd love to do it all on audio.
I must say, I'd really liked the part with Phillip, especially with his concerns to just be able to manage to keep things running and functional over any "idealism"
Also the one with Terrence was again a bit of a telltale sign of the behaviors of Biters and his band, though it was interesting to see the nuance in his behavior.
I'll be following this, to see how this all unfold.
Also the one with Terrence was again a bit of a telltale sign of the behaviors of Biters and his band, though it was interesting to see the nuance in his behavior.
I'll be following this, to see how this all unfold.
:D Two stories in one day! Oh boy!
So... there are a couple of things i want to say:
1. I never expected philip to be so... blunt? Aggressive? Rude? Pick one... Granted I can understand why... and I still like him.
2. Terrance I'm like less now... I mean, as a character, I like him! But... ya know.
3. The scene with all the photo-taking made me all FEELs D: It was sweet...
4. Oh god lord, that ending. RUN MURI
RUN NOW.
:D Hehe, I loved it!
So... there are a couple of things i want to say:
1. I never expected philip to be so... blunt? Aggressive? Rude? Pick one... Granted I can understand why... and I still like him.
2. Terrance I'm like less now... I mean, as a character, I like him! But... ya know.
3. The scene with all the photo-taking made me all FEELs D: It was sweet...
4. Oh god lord, that ending. RUN MURI
RUN NOW.
:D Hehe, I loved it!
You got it right with Phillip! He's not here to worry about being polite, he's just straightforward, says what he means that's all. If it rubs you the wrong way, oh well, he's got things to do. As for Terrence, in a way that's his big problem. He doesn't want to rock the boat, so he just kinda goes along with the FRB even knowing what they're up to. If he just had a little more assertiveness...
I'm sensing lots of peanut butter ahead, lots of it. ;)
As I said earlier in Pac's stream, I am loving the heck out of this story. It's refreshing to see the various themes tackled like this, as dark as things can be, no one is fully bad nor fully good. There's multiple sides to a viewpoint, and multiple points of view. It's all complex, but that's life.
I also like the little subtle things, like the front door always being locked. It's one of those things where you're curious on why, but at the same time you have a sinking feeling about the answer.
It's interesting with Terrance being a part of the FRB, especially with what they advocate and his personal view on things. Not to mention with who he is, it might be a tricky pill to swallow if it was known to the others.
As I said earlier in Pac's stream, I am loving the heck out of this story. It's refreshing to see the various themes tackled like this, as dark as things can be, no one is fully bad nor fully good. There's multiple sides to a viewpoint, and multiple points of view. It's all complex, but that's life.
I also like the little subtle things, like the front door always being locked. It's one of those things where you're curious on why, but at the same time you have a sinking feeling about the answer.
It's interesting with Terrance being a part of the FRB, especially with what they advocate and his personal view on things. Not to mention with who he is, it might be a tricky pill to swallow if it was known to the others.
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