Hello Everyone! I'm ZoeyZorua. And I'm new to FA and everthing else really ;) So I've wanted to start a Pokemon baby fur comic for awhile now cus I'd love to make something that everyone can enjoy! And *cough* iv'e been itching to use my new drawing tablet *cough* LOL. If things look a little shakey I'll try to figure out how to work it better >.< And surprisingly enough my fursona isn't really the main character of this comic but more like a sidekick. Also I'll try to post pages as soon as I can! And once I get into a grove I'll make deadlines and stuff! I hope you guys like this! ;D
Summary:
Victoria is a 16-year-old Vulpix who finds herself committing arson to a deserted mansion in Pinwheel Forest. The weird thing is; she doesn’t recall doing it! Stranger yet, Victoria is being followed by a Zorua named Zoey that only she can see! Is she going crazy? The doctors at the local Pokémon Center think so. AND they just started a new program to help out trouble Poké-Teens! But why is everyone wearing diapers?!
Next page:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10780687/
Summary:
Victoria is a 16-year-old Vulpix who finds herself committing arson to a deserted mansion in Pinwheel Forest. The weird thing is; she doesn’t recall doing it! Stranger yet, Victoria is being followed by a Zorua named Zoey that only she can see! Is she going crazy? The doctors at the local Pokémon Center think so. AND they just started a new program to help out trouble Poké-Teens! But why is everyone wearing diapers?!
Next page:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10780687/
Category Story / Comics
Species Pokemon
Size 990 x 1280px
File Size 185.5 kB
This looks promising. One thing, though - I would suggest that you make your characters look more... dynamic; instead of making it look like a puppet, imagine (heck, even research and practice) what they would look like while they were doing what they were doing.
For example: Victoria would be leaning forward. Her body would be a bit more loose. Her feet (or would it be paws?) would be bent, as would her shoes. Also, the material of her shoes would be a little scrunched up where they were bending. She's running; everything is moving around! Add some motion blur! Also, she probably wouldn't be going fast enough in real life to make her hair blow, unless it was already windy, but it adds to the overall motion of the image.
One more thing: I FRIGGIN' LOVE ZORUA AND ZOROARK! I'm trying to breed a shiny at the moment.
For example: Victoria would be leaning forward. Her body would be a bit more loose. Her feet (or would it be paws?) would be bent, as would her shoes. Also, the material of her shoes would be a little scrunched up where they were bending. She's running; everything is moving around! Add some motion blur! Also, she probably wouldn't be going fast enough in real life to make her hair blow, unless it was already windy, but it adds to the overall motion of the image.
One more thing: I FRIGGIN' LOVE ZORUA AND ZOROARK! I'm trying to breed a shiny at the moment.
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