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The Promise (unfinished): a short film
by 4evatimmy
Art Whore
13 years ago
This is a film about loosing love and how to deal with it.
I am still working on it so its by no means done. It is ready to be screened so i can get feedback on it. Any feed back would be very helpful.
http://youtu.be/oNdfnZ6h81g <--- click here!
I am still working on it so its by no means done. It is ready to be screened so i can get feedback on it. Any feed back would be very helpful.
http://youtu.be/oNdfnZ6h81g <--- click here!
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szalen8
~szalen8
Pretty good, nice surprise leabian ending. The music for the scenes where she lost the necklace was quite innapropriate. The whole black and white thing was very clever. I enjoyed it.
4evatimmy
~4evatimmy
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how was the music inappropriate?
szalen8
~szalen8
It just didn't match the mood. Although the scenes were dramatic, sad tinkling would have been betterIMO instead of the opera-esque music reserved for more epic feelings of sadness or the like. I dunno. It didn't work for me
