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I cant believe this took over a year to do. I feel so ashamed of myself. But life and writers block, and practicing your art gets in the way a bit...
Along with only having 2 hours pc time and trying to be social kinda limits you. But I digress. Here it is the second part In this part we find out a little more about Crimsons developing flaws and a little bit about what kind of stallion Typhoon is. I hope you like it as Im trying to make my characters deep and not shallow. Post your comments and I hope the next part wont take a year.
Along with only having 2 hours pc time and trying to be social kinda limits you. But I digress. Here it is the second part In this part we find out a little more about Crimsons developing flaws and a little bit about what kind of stallion Typhoon is. I hope you like it as Im trying to make my characters deep and not shallow. Post your comments and I hope the next part wont take a year.
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File Size 12.1 kB
I'm enjoying the story so far. These kind of mystery things always make me curious. I hope the next part doesn't take another year either. As for the grammar, some of your sentences sort of turn into runon sentences, without commas or semi-colons. It's not bad enough to make the story unreadable though. I can sympathize with you a little in that I often only get 2 to 3 hours to write a week. Keep up the good work though; I would like to see more.
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