This... is awesome... I like it so far, I can't wait for it to be colored!

I really hope I can find m lightbox before I end up having to tape it to a window and hurt my back standing awkward for awhile lol.
The joys of moving into temp housing and living in a jumbled mess.

I'm glad you like it so far, he body took me forever but the flower surprisingly was easier than I expected.

I noted you about a small concern, and I'm sure that you'll see what I meant by that.

I will fix that for sure, the right one at that angle might be a challenge. I will be in a pile of reference photos while I do it.

F5 and let me know if the fixes are ok. I need to adjust the right leg some. I noticed after scanning making it digitigrade without moving the foot made the leg offkilter. I redrew the whole foot area on the left leg and should have done that on the right.

Also 4 fingers and a thumb (tho you can't see the thumb) added as well. :X

If you notice anything else let me know, I won't be inking it tonight so you can look at it a few more times and point out other errors if you'd like.

Thank you. ;X

On an anatomy critique note, his right upper arm looks weirdly short compared to his left. You could probably fix it by lifting out the flower's petal rather than reposing, though.
'Sides that, it is lovely. c:

I see what you mean, his elbow SHOULD be pushing the flower petal at that angle.
Thank you.

Fucking gorgeous, Mazzeh! I can't wait to see it finished... The pose is wonderful and I always adore your cut-out backgrounds. You're SO good at them!

I love the box backgrounds.

DOES ANYONE ELSE THINK THE FLOWER LOOKS LIKE IT'S TOO FAR TO THE RIGHT AND NOT CENTERED ON HIS BACK OR IS IT JUST ME!?!??!

I think that's actually related to the arm too. :P Ignoring odd angling, it looks fine to me. c:

I'm gunna need to find find some flower pictures to fix the flower angling, I attempted too but it didn't work lol.
If you wanna redline it feel free.

I think I see that the shoulder is just a little far back/down- erm I can try to redline that bit for you but it won't be til tomorrow cause it's bedtime <3

if you want to go for it. I won't be inking it tonight.

I totally wooooould, but I don't have a working stylus for my tablet and I don't trust my ability to do it with a mouse o no.

Now you mention it, it does look like its a bit too far to the right. but yeah, like  Zophia said, it's the arm.

Man to live in a world of giant flowers so i could just glue one to someone and have a reference haha.

I'll figure it out.

What you could do is use perspective, that the left petal and parts of the upper and lower petals would be slightly smaller, so that way it looks angled, if you know what I mean?

Oo Yes I do know what you mean.
Thank you for the tip. :X

xainy below did an amazing redline for me so I was able to get the flower to look better so I'm happy with it. :X

Thanks for all your input on the sketch, hopefully i have time to ink it soon.

I'm terrible at describing what I mean, so I made a redline to try to help with the flower perspective! http://oi44.tinypic.com/5jwsn9.jpg

The main thing to remember is that at that angle, you won't be able to see this side of middle of the flower. You're looking at it kind of from the side so the petal closest to us will be sort of heart shaped.

I think you also drew his forearm a bit too long. It's in the right place, just move his upper arm over to the right a little and it'll look fine!

I also put the backs of his knees in there. You definitely have the right idea and that's a hard part of the body to draw!

Anyway, the blue is his body, the purple is the outer part of his petal wings and the orange is the petals themselves. I didn't draw any of the details like the stamen and stuff, you did great on all that, just need to fix the flower perspective. :) All in all, the anatomy looks really good, though [especially impressed by his hand!], and I can't wait to see the finished version of this. You've improved so much since I first met you!

You rock thank you, the flower pisses me off a hell of a lot less and I think the backs of my legs look better now. :X

I'm so glad it helped! Flower petals are so dumb to draw, I agree, haha.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10623528/
Much better now I think. :X

Thanks for helping  MAZZ, I know this character is driving her crazy! lol

My pleasure! He's a very awesome character, I'm quite taken with him. :)

Isn't he cute? I freaking love him.

It's not really driving me crazy, I just VERY RARELY get paid for art so I want to make it the best thing I ever drew when I do. :X
Btw updated sketch: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10623528/
I'm so much more thrilled with the flower and arms now.

That and I'm use to drawing birds and... MAMMALS WHY YOU GOTTA BE NOT BIRDS. D: