Great spirit for the tram. You find the life in the machine.

Thanks a lot Heywulf, and thanks for pointing me the mistake in a note ;)

Aaaaaaaaaah, toi aussi tu aimes ça les vieux trams ? Ca m'a toujours fasciné ces bêtes-là, très beau travail de composition, très "brise de printemps d'un autre siècle" qui me fait rêver à tout coup ^^

Pas que je sois fasciné, mais disons que je suis toujours interpellé par ces p'tites bêtes là! Et puis, le musée du chemin de fer de ma région aide beaucoup en ce sens, j'adore le côté steam-punk que peuvent avoir ces machines, et ce tram ne fait pas défaut!
Marmelmm est un fana de ces machines, et même s'il m'avait donné carte blanche pour la commission, j'ai tout de suite pensé à un vieux trolley!

two details: Tali's hand on the handle/windowframe has the thumb on the wrong side, and I don't know if that elbow isn't a bit too high...

nice scenery, old and forgotten tramway leading to a sleepy village by the sea... you can almost feel the wind blow the hair into her face.
nice composition, I see a frame around the main pic... and the close-up outside it, this will look great!

Heywulf noted me about that damn' thumb, that's already corrected even if I hadn't edited the pic yet. That will be for the final submission!
I'm not sure about the elbow. The shadows will certainly help to read the pic =)
Thanks for the critic, and for the kind comment too =)

at your service, monsieur.

at first I was like, "bah, can't find anxthing wrong" when I saw that thumb. then I looked a bit closer, but the elbow form was all that I could find. :)

They have some rather cute outfits on. What should we expect to see on this little trip of theirs? Nice idea with using the trolley as well, don't see those too often.

I don't know what their destination is, or the sequel of such a pic ^^
That's one commission, but that may be the beginning of a little spin-off after all.
For the trolley, Marmelmm is completely fond of with those little cute things, so I found easily the subject of the commission =P