Oh goodness, this is brilliant! I love dissonance when done right! I would think getting the "right" dissonance (ironic!) would be hard! Can't wait to hear when it comes out!

If I did a trade with you, I'd totally get something dissonant!

Thanks! Finding the right notes to use at the beginning was a little tricky, but not too bad! =3

I like it! Hopefully you'll finish it, I'd love to hear the finished piece!

Oh I will! =)

As a side note, I personally would really like to hear more descending piano notes in the background, where each note deepens in a decent before the next set. Drat, what is that called in musical terms... Anyway, I love the guitar, its perfect, and I love how you chose a set disharmonious piano for the notes. Again though, I still feel like descending piano notes would be better than the up and downs the notes do right now. Might just be me though. Sorry I gave such a short, uninformative comment last time, I try so hard to avoid that on art XD

Music terms i couldn't tell ya; I have very little theory and no formal teaching, I just go where the song takes me. XD
I can certainly try that! Crit is always appreciated, especially before finishing! many thanks! =3

No problem! I really like your music! So I'll probably be listening to most of your demos and giving my two-cents worth. Who knows, you might find something you really like with it!