I hope it's exciting for you. I don't know if you've written anything else, but you've managed to finish a chapter of a story I'm sure you have great plans for; and find the courage to put it where others can see it. It's interesting, by the way. I like the scene on the bus where he wakes up in a surprising position. If you want any suggestions or anything I'd be happy to give what I can. Welcome to furry writing.

Also, this is number 20! (http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/4602055/)

Thank you, Thank you very very much! I hope chapter two meets the level of quality that has been set!

You're welcome
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