Belated update, this week has just been mental. I have been reading the comments and critiques though, and I'm fixing up earlier pages a bit as I get messages about potential problems. Page 12 I'm going to probably revamp a bit once this is done. Sorry I've been more quiet than usual, just been busy working on the tutorial pack as well. Until the tutorial pack is done I'm not taking anymore contributions/cameos though.
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At the moment I'd say it's very unlikely. It's too difficult to work characters into the panels without distracting from the focus of the story (unless I make them really tiny background characters, in which case I feel bad if they're barely visible, you know?). So probably not but we'll see.
I'm really intrigued by this comic. I like the art and the characters. The idea of something being Helltouched in a society that hates and fears them is pretty cool, a nice allegory for real things that go on in our own society. I really am curious to see if Frost and Cinder will be able to break the unicorn's spell/curse. :)
No solid plans on that front. Maybe, if a furry publisher is looking to print it, it'll be available, but I won't do any independent print runs myself. Printing is an enormous undertaking for one person; the cost of printing/packaging/postage plus the time spent addressing them all and mailing them out, then resending the ones that don't quite make it (which happens WAY more often than it really should; I've come to hate the post). It's a bit of a nightmare, honestly, so I won't be doing that again all by myself XP
HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Cinder's facial expression honestly made my night. Again I must ask this question, (and will most likely do so until I get some form of answer from anyone), was Bryce the one to leave the first note? Cinder keeps referencing Bryce "Pinching his ass." Does this mean Bryce knows? P.S. Love how Cinder just threw Bryce under the bus bout being a virgin.
Truly another amazing piece, sounds like you've got a lot goin' on right now though. Don't burn yourelf out on acount of us.
Truly another amazing piece, sounds like you've got a lot goin' on right now though. Don't burn yourelf out on acount of us.
I know but Cinder also said on two different occasion the Bryce had pinched his ass. The first time he said "I saw you ice the floor to trip up Bryce after he pinched your ass." Which was immediately after Frost discovered the first note and Bryce was leaving the room with a shit-eating grin on his face. Makes ya think, don't it?
Darn. I was kind of hoping they would stay antagonistic toward one another. It's a dynamic that is too underutilized in modern storytelling. Plus it's more realistic - sharing a possibly personally destructive secret might be enough to get two people to work together, but it can't undue the resentment of years of bullying; not in that short a time.
But that's just me being picky! I'm enjoy this as it is and can't wait to see where you take it.
But that's just me being picky! I'm enjoy this as it is and can't wait to see where you take it.
Hmm. I think I misread/read a bit much into the "I was happy to have him on my side" line. I can see how it can be interpreted a little less glowingly ("I'd rather have him on my side than against" vs "he's an awesome guy to have on my side"), so that makes a bit more sense, yeah.
Hmm. Cinder may "have your back", Frost, but could be his real interest is your ass!! The line betwen protective and possessive seems to be blurring - Cinder seems more cranked about Bryce's fanny pat than Frost was. Maybe it's the wolf-deer thing....to munch or to mount, ah the choices predators face! Either way, the intensity just adds to the mystery.
What a great storyline. It's like the movie serials they used to show at the firehouse when I was a kid!! You can't wait for the next installment!!
What a great storyline. It's like the movie serials they used to show at the firehouse when I was a kid!! You can't wait for the next installment!!
the problem with this comic is that it isn't made clear that we're supposed to dislike ceil, it seemed like he and frost were getting along just fine and it wasn't his fault that he disappeared after they smashed, I guess we're supposed to dislike him because he's a unicorn but it's not made clear why, and I've looked at it from every angle possible. not meaning to hate, just thought I'd express my opinion, I like the second chapter btw.
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