Nice job! I'm always apprehensive when doing something with so much detail, I'm afraid I'll miss something or mess up. You seem to have covered everything though; I admire your ambition. :D

Thanks. There are quite a few badly shaded spots actually and the violet of "poncho" (or whatever that is) isn't as deep as I originally wanted, should have mix it with dark blue.

Very cool symbols. Do they actually mean anything or did you make them up? If they are made up, you did a good job making them seem "authentic" versus random lines hatched together. Also, love your name. :D

It's about 50/50, since Kagenuma Nezumi are supposed to be strongly influenced by Nipponese culture (which in turn are strongly influenced by Cathay), I thought they should use similar writing systems as do the Japanese in our world, just a bit different. So instead of modern standard kanji/hanzi characters I use different ones that are based on older forms of these before they were unified (mostly seal script, but also scripts used on bronzes and oracle bones). However, while Japanese kana is ultimately derived from simplified hanzi characters, the "Nezumi Kana" (on the bone plate hanging from the shield and on the rim of the large bronze disc) is made up entirely, except for a few characters that resemble original warhammer skaven runes, but I tried to make them look stylisticaly consistent. So yes, they actually DO mean something.
Also, it's rather a status than a name. A status of power, honour, privilege and general awesomeness. Now bow before my glorious presence and get me some bacon.

That is an impressive knowledge of symbols. Are you able to read any of the Japanese or Asian symbols or did you study them more for overall design and theme?

And, as a rat myself, I bow for no one! ;)

Well I took some classes of both japanese and classical chinese a few years ago, but I'm mostly out of practice by now. But at least I know how to properly use a chinese or japanese dictionary.