my story final

(3 hours of running later)
Draco: ok I think I know how to beat him.
Zack: plaese do tell.*so I told him that if we try to tip him it will get as a change to
find a way out of here*
Zack: that just might work but what are we going to use to tip him with?
Draco:hmmm...*I looked around for something and I find some rope that was tied to
something but I didn't care were* we will use this rope.
Zack: hmmmmmmm*then Zack looked up to see that the rope was holding the lights* wait
draco!*but it was too late I untiled the rope and it sent me flying to the roof*
Draco:woooooooh!*I let go of the rope and the lights fell on chonos knooking him out then
I fell on zack*
Draco: hey we did it zack!Zack?
Zack: down here now get off!
Draco: oh sorry let me gave you a hand.
Zack: you call that a hand more like a claw.*but before I could get to him the black and
white dragon gurb our han... I mean clews(man I get to get use to saying that) and said.*
# the winners*all the other dragons cheered relley loud then a black and gold dragon come to us a said.*
King dragon: So we have found the two lengedly dragons of lore now we can win this war
Both Draco and Zack: WAR?!

The end of a new beginning

*where this is where my awful story ended and my good one begin.*