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XDragoon #23: The trap of Casulo!
Script, Art and Colors: Felipe Marcantonio
Translation Revision: Jim Eriksson
Pages: 48
March 2013
ENGLISH
http://xdragoon.com/comics/en/023/index.php
PORTUGUESE
http://xdragoon.com/comics/pt/023/index.php
Twitter: http://www.twitter.com/xdragoon
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Happy Easter everyone! 8D
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XDragoon #23: The trap of Casulo!
Script, Art and Colors: Felipe Marcantonio
Translation Revision: Jim Eriksson
Pages: 48
March 2013
ENGLISH
http://xdragoon.com/comics/en/023/index.php
PORTUGUESE
http://xdragoon.com/comics/pt/023/index.php
Category All / Comics
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 700 x 906px
File Size 171.6 kB
Page 5
"back down from a dragon" (From works better than to in this statement.)
Page 12
Marvelous (Marvelous only has one l in it.)
Page 13
"It'd be a shame for someone to die, when they're not sure of their conviction." (This statement was just all together awkward.)
"But how did you..." (Include did here)
You know Yuski, I hope you're actually considering putting these corrections in. I haven't exactly seen them be used in your comics.
"back down from a dragon" (From works better than to in this statement.)
Page 12
Marvelous (Marvelous only has one l in it.)
Page 13
"It'd be a shame for someone to die, when they're not sure of their conviction." (This statement was just all together awkward.)
"But how did you..." (Include did here)
You know Yuski, I hope you're actually considering putting these corrections in. I haven't exactly seen them be used in your comics.
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