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Yeup, my first time attempting a Persian. Not sure if I failed or won, but I do like the end result.
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http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/4455932/
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krystalaristokatsCommissions like this are open!
http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/4455932/
Category Artwork (Digital) / Bondage
Species Housecat
Size 989 x 1280px
File Size 255 kB
oh ,sorry uh lets see here...on the left hand side the boob appears larger than the other. and where the ribbon is coming down from the chest to the hip,along with the right arm it looks to be cutting in a bit too deep. I'm sorry for the criticism,just something I could keep my mouth shut about .;A;
I don't mind concrit, I just prefer it when people tell me what to watch out for/ fix rather than a generic "something is wrong" comment. Being vague doesn't help me! But thank you. I'll see if I can't tweak it. It's a 1.5 hour sketch, but the parts you mentioned are no biggie to go back and work over.
Don't sweat it. I don't have the I Love Critique icon on my profile for nothing. :) Anyhow, I did a few tweaks. Loosened up the boobs and arm area, and fixed a small issue with the hip I didn't notice. I tried to fix the symmetry on the boobs, but they're not perfectly symmetrical anyhow irl x_x
Hopefully it looks a bit better.
Hopefully it looks a bit better.
This is a tude I like. Awesome approach! I feel the same way about critique. Some can't handle it as awesome as this, and take it personally, but I feel...Hey, if I don't see what's wrong, and you do...Tell me so I learn. x3 I just couldn't let this awesome slide without applauding it.
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