Kidnapped, ch.1
new storyline ive been workin on, gonna be four chapters total, and im gonna shoot for posting a chapter every other week or so.
comments are love! let me know what you think of this new story
ch.1 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10120803
ch.2 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10248814
ch.3 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10361022
ch.4 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10420745
comments are love! let me know what you think of this new story
ch.1 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10120803
ch.2 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10248814
ch.3 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10361022
ch.4 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10420745
Category Story / Vore
Species Pokemon
Size 120 x 99px
File Size 16.2 kB
Listed in Folders
This certainly has a lot of vore in it. So far, there's one real character, and the reader doesn't know him very well yet. His kidnapping plight is somewhat offset by his ruthlessness as a predator, which makes him somewhat of an anti-hero so far. It's hard to say if this will remain the case as the story progresses, but that's just a first impression.
Line-by-line the style is smooth and creative. It's fun to read. I make a point of reading anything you submit, partially for that reason. :)
Line-by-line the style is smooth and creative. It's fun to read. I make a point of reading anything you submit, partially for that reason. :)
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