So here is my first real story. i'd love to hear feed back and stuff.
So this is a fanfic of dust featuring my character "Ash" Ashlynn, and Ricky Veclair. another character i made for the story. Also, incase the text format does'nt work out i'll paste the story here in the desacription


CLOSE CALL
CHAPTER 1
"Hey Ricky toss the ball already, we've been waiting for an hour already!"
"C-c'mon Ash, i'm pretty high up".The poor golden
retreiver whimpered knowing what would happen if he
slipped.
"Ricky, you've got thirty seconds' to reach for
that ball or i'll personally wipe you of the
side of the tower with YOUR rifle!
(oh shit...) ricky thought to himself as he leaned over the edge of the radio tower to get the ball."Almost the-"
"Ten!"
"But i'm so close!"
"Close won't cut in combat!"
"But i thought you said today was gonna be a relaxation day?!"
"What can i say? I lied." The wolfess gave an evil smirk as she raised what looked liked Ricky's Gallente sniper rifle.
"Wait your serious?!" the retriever shouted, confusion in his eyes.
"ONE!" (BANG)Ashy sighed as she saw the poor recruit fall from the tower, already dead from the wound. She raised her wrist to signal a clean up squad "Scavenger this is Gunner, we need a bio-recycle unit asap, Veclair got himself shot agian."
There was a sigh from the other end of the comm."Ash, you better be happy that kid likes you enough not to have pressed charges already"
Ashlynn let out a slight giggle"Heh, kid does'nt care, it's like he thinks the instant conciousness transfer is"fun". I swear he probably get's a kick out of it".She could'nt help but let out a laugh at this, she knew it was a lie.
The man on the comm sighed"Well just make sure he does'nt hate you eventually, otherwise he'll most likely report ya".
Ashlynn sighed"Roger that scavenger".
"What the hell was that for?!"
Ashlynn smiled"So how was the transfer?"she began to laugh at how many times she had already killed him."What does that make Ricky? one-hundred and fifteen to twelve?" she laughed, already on the ground.
"Hey you think it's funny, why don't you try and go through transference every two days!"
"Heh, we've been over this, i'm an officer, if i got shot as many times as you i'd be charged to get cloned agian."
"Yeah' and you get more equipment though!"
Ashlynn sighed"Oh well, maybe if you had'nt of crashed that dropship in pilot training you would'nt be in infantry." She said, attempting to gain her composure once more. "Besides are you used to it?"
"Yeah b-"
"Than be happy. The in combat units tend to cause nausea on mercs' that are'nt used to it!"
Ricky sighed knowing she was mostly right...mostly.
"Fine but you owe me still."
Ash looked to him."Alright, I'll bite. What's the deal?" Usually she would just ignore things like that but now she felt different, like she needed to be watching over the recruit assigned to her.
"Wow your actually gonna listen?"the retreiver scoffed.
"Yep, as long as you make me a promise."
"M'kay what?"
"Should i be wounded like i was last time....shoot me, i'd rather go through transfer agian than sit there missing an eye and two legs like last time." She grimaced at the thought, the mission had been her recruit's first.
She had hoped that it would be quick and clean...but the world does'nt work like that. Since that day she had a cybernetic eye and two prosthetic legs below the knee.
He nodded"Okay."
"So what do i owe ya?"Ashlynn raised a brow at him crossing her arms'.
"Eh, i dunno." He scratched his head. "How abouut, hmmm. A date!"
'M'kay seem's fa-, wait what? Your actually gonna do it?"
"Mhmm, i never turn down a free meal."
"So uhh, tommarow at five o'clock?"
"Sure, just don't expect me to dress outside of combat attire." Ashlynn tapped on the metal plates wrapped around her thighs'.
"Uhh, okay then. Later.
"Later."

to be continued