Everything takes too long in this song!
I don't want to sound offensive, but this is one of the more repetitive things I've come across.
Plus it took several minutes just to hear the bass!

You could remix and add a lot to it though (maybe even a tune! a longer one). And add a thumbnail to that remix, 'cause things like this get lost without a pretty picture to click. I should know.

I've gotten several comments on how much everything is dragged out in this song, so I don't take offense. I never really thought this one was worth putting up on FA, but I figured I'd like to hear criticism.
I just got this new program, so I don't have much of a sound pool to work with, but I have created a better song (that's not related to this one), so you might want to check it out, if you'd like. And it has a thumbnail! :D
I'll try to remix this one a bit later though...after I get a bigger sound pool.

You replied! Fabulous.
Oh yes, this is worth... not giving up on. :3
As for the other one, don't know, the effects are cool but some things in it miss my taste, that's all.

Yep! I just haven't been on much because my internet hates me.
Anyway, yes, I'll definately work on it.
And I thank you for taking the time to comment on my art. It's greatly appreciated. :3

I really like this. I mean, yes it moves slow, and yes, it is repetitive, but it's still good. In terms of dance-ability, this wouldn't work at a club. But as a background track for something, it'd be awesome. Keep at it, you'll get the hang of things. It already sounds better than mine! XD

Trust me, I've created a lot more faster-moving music than this. This was made on a new program I got a few months ago, and I'm still figuring out how to use it. And, I don't have much of a sound pool, sooo... I really don't have much to work with anyway. But yeah, thatnks a lot for the comment! :D