Oh, good GOD.
Please spare me the "wounded artiste" routine. I did not "attack" either you or your piece, I merely suggested that it could be improved. Any writer or artist (myself included), is always looking for useful feedback.

I have no time for artists or writers who can't take constructive criticism. If all you're looking for is affirmation don't expect your art or writing to ever improve. You may indeed be "writing from the heart", but to use it as a feeble excuse to bounce of critique is disingenuous at best.

did i ASK for feedback? no. did i ASK for criticism? no. get the fuck away from my page, before i report you for harassment.

wow that's great! ur rhyme scheme is impeccable! no pun intended, lol.

thanks ^^