Well now I realize why my novel is falling apart towards the end, because it doesn't make sense! I've got so many subplots and mini stories weaving through the narrative that the main focus is lost. Unfortunately this means a compete rewrite but this time i'm going to be using an outlining tool to make sure that every single piece of plot and every scene is both relevant and makes sense.

Anyway this means I'm going to be working a lot now focusing on getting this damn thing done. It's been three years! The basics of the story are staying the same, the prologue is staying and I'm sure a few scenes will still be in but for the most part I'm going to have to completely rewrite.

Also to keep my skills sharp I'm going to be offering for one time only short pieces of writing, a paragraph or two based on a picture. Later on this may evolve into short stories but those probably won't be free.

So how can I get a nifty piece of writing from you Ushka? Well you just need to post in the comments and give me as much detail as you can about what you want the SHORT scene to be and a little info about the characters. I will choose the ones I think I can complete. Often you don't choose inspiration it chooses you.

So here are the lucky 5!

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Rest assured that it will be of the highest quality I can muster. And yes these short scenes are completely free!