Since nobody has responded yet I'll go first.

What I don't like about it is that it's not artwork but scribbles.
Not intending to offend, but that's pretty much what I find of it.

Now, before somebody with flawed interpretation tries to stomp me allow me to be more precise about what I mean with that.

It looks "Not finished" - That's what I meant with scribbles.

Keep practicing, though!

well they are just scribbles (to me) x3 i draw to practice, the VERY few pieces i have lined/inked i did out of curiosity to see how they would turn out >..<

and i know ya aren't being mean hun :) i asked for criticism

but thank you for the feedback, i only post the doodles i think are "good" i have soo many more i haven't posted xD

I think you're getting better with each piece :) Keep it up!! <3
Also who made your lovely icon? :)

thank you hun! ^^ *hugs tight!* and i dont remember who made it ; 3; ive had it for a LOOOONG time @..@

Since I'm one of those oddballs who tends to examine those whom are watching me (Seriously, I'm in the same boat as you-why the hell are they here? I just write and commision-no art is my own), but not watch, I'll speak my piece for now.

Going through your gallery, what I find myself liking the most are your pieces aren't overly elaborate pieces with complex shading and lines and clean up and bla bla bla. They're sketches, or as one said above, scribbles.

To me, those are the most precious forms of work an artist should appreciate, because they show the raw talent. There's no program helping to clean things up, it's just natural and pure in my eyes.